Is your writing “too wordy” or “falling flat” according to critiques, but you’re not sure exactly why or how to spice it up? Your concept, plot and characters might be delicious, but passive sentences and filler words could be sapping the flavor from your prose. Join us tomorrow, Oct. 14, 10am-1pm, at the West Brach Library in Duval County and have the opportunity to network with published authors and enjoy several craft workshops, including my presentation: I Sense You Are Using Filler Words: eliminating unwanted passivity. See you there!
Author Melody Johnson 
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